Yes Charlotte loving the magazine cover! I think your image is really good wonderfully clear and beautifully done. Your heading is really nice it blends in well with the background you have chose. I was to make one complaint it would be that the cover lines are too light in colour, maybe a dark blue or white would work better but i understand you wnat to keep it in roughly the same colour as the background! But really good Bazzzzz!
I really love how Megan has really dark, eye-lined eyes, and is looking straight at the camera, it would make potential buyers be drawn into reading the magazine. I also like how your background is not just a plain colour, it has a pattern that fits in with the colour scheme. The only thing I would do is make some of the cover lines a bit clearer, as some of them are blending a bit into the background.
Char this is brill, i love the photo of megan, it's really powerful and the main logo. Nice drop shadow etc on the main cover lines. Only thing is I can't read the bottom very well, with the cream against the white and that. Maybe a black outline will do the trick? But otherwise, as Jack says "really good Bazzzz" :)
Char i think your front cover is wicked! shows all the conventions of a music magazine, i like the colour scheme of gold and greeny blue .Only thing as claire says text down the bottom is not very visible
Baileey. Brilliant magazine cover. The colours work very well together, Painter got an interesting pose going on. Only what the others said, the text is quite light so not that easy to read. But good stuff otherwise. Go on Char.
The title really blends in with the background and having the drop shadow makes it stand out at the same time, really effective. Great choice of colours, it looks like some of the text is actually printed onto the wall. It's quite hard to read the light brown/beige colour as the text goes to the bottom but its nice how you started with a deep colour towards the top and gradiated it as you went down to a lighter version of that colour. I like your choice of font for "Megan and the Painters" :D
wwwwwicked front page! I agree with ellis it shows all the conventions of a music magazine, the different fonts work really well together i think. I don't know how to say it but like the gold font, the bits of gold in the background and most obviously her 'gold' hair works, little things like that make it a really good front page, if i had to say a bad thing about it, it would be that the cover lines at the bottom are a little hard to read. You could try a drop shadow or something, to make them stand out a little more, on the whole REALLY LIKE IT :)
I really like this cover. I like the title as its quite different, the font is good and the color goes well with the background. The pose of the picture is good as its quite different. Nice fonts. Only thing is the bottom text is quite hard to see, but the rest is wicked :)
Top o' the morning to ya! Damn, commenting this late means that everyone else has already said stuff, so I don't have a lot left to say! One thing though, it might be worth seeing whether the cover wouldn't look better with the various headlines made a bit larger; you shouldn't be afraid of covering up a bit of hair or shoulder. Also the main headline, "Megan and the Painters", doesn't really look all that main. Try to make it more eye-catching, as it should be one of the main features that makes a customer decide to grab your mag off the shelf. You'll probably need to put it across two lines, but that shouldn't detract from the quality. Well, good luck with your mag.
I love your front cover, it looks quite similar to the covers of iD magazines and the photo of megan is very powerful. But, £3.49. Quite a random price!
BAILEY! THIS IS AMAZING LOVE LOVE IT. but i cant actually read the text at the bottom. but apart from that itss soo good and megan looked really niceee in it
Shirley! Your magazine is just about nearly as cool as you. I love is apart from that ugly man you have on the font ha. BUT the eyes do look good and my hair looks okay. Anyway back to the point I really love the blue background which compliments the photograph really well. I also think that the photo has a sense of mystery to it which is really inviting for the readers. I also love the clever use of puns and alliteration very orignial and quirky just like you! Love Vickers ;) x
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Yes Charlotte loving the magazine cover! I think your image is really good wonderfully clear and beautifully done. Your heading is really nice it blends in well with the background you have chose. I was to make one complaint it would be that the cover lines are too light in colour, maybe a dark blue or white would work better but i understand you wnat to keep it in roughly the same colour as the background! But really good Bazzzzz!
I really love how Megan has really dark, eye-lined eyes, and is looking straight at the camera, it would make potential buyers be drawn into reading the magazine. I also like how your background is not just a plain colour, it has a pattern that fits in with the colour scheme.
The only thing I would do is make some of the cover lines a bit clearer, as some of them are blending a bit into the background.
Char this is brill, i love the photo of megan, it's really powerful and the main logo. Nice drop shadow etc on the main cover lines. Only thing is I can't read the bottom very well, with the cream against the white and that. Maybe a black outline will do the trick?
But otherwise, as Jack says "really good Bazzzz" :)
Char i think your front cover is wicked! shows all the conventions of a music magazine, i like the colour scheme of gold and greeny blue .Only thing as claire says text down the bottom is not very visible
Baileey.
Brilliant magazine cover.
The colours work very well together, Painter got an interesting pose going on.
Only what the others said, the text is quite light so not that easy to read. But good stuff otherwise.
Go on Char.
The title really blends in with the background and having the drop shadow makes it stand out at the same time, really effective. Great choice of colours, it looks like some of the text is actually printed onto the wall. It's quite hard to read the light brown/beige colour as the text goes to the bottom but its nice how you started with a deep colour towards the top and gradiated it as you went down to a lighter version of that colour. I like your choice of font for "Megan and the Painters" :D
wwwwwicked front page! I agree with ellis it shows all the conventions of a music magazine, the different fonts work really well together i think. I don't know how to say it but like the gold font, the bits of gold in the background and most obviously her 'gold' hair works, little things like that make it a really good front page, if i had to say a bad thing about it, it would be that the cover lines at the bottom are a little hard to read. You could try a drop shadow or something, to make them stand out a little more, on the whole REALLY LIKE IT :)
I really like this cover. I like the title as its quite different, the font is good and the color goes well with the background. The pose of the picture is good as its quite different. Nice fonts. Only thing is the bottom text is quite hard to see, but the rest is wicked :)
Top o' the morning to ya!
Damn, commenting this late means that everyone else has already said stuff, so I don't have a lot left to say!
One thing though, it might be worth seeing whether the cover wouldn't look better with the various headlines made a bit larger; you shouldn't be afraid of covering up a bit of hair or shoulder. Also the main headline, "Megan and the Painters", doesn't really look all that main. Try to make it more eye-catching, as it should be one of the main features that makes a customer decide to grab your mag off the shelf. You'll probably need to put it across two lines, but that shouldn't detract from the quality.
Well, good luck with your mag.
I love your front cover, it looks quite similar to the covers of iD magazines and the photo of megan is very powerful. But, £3.49. Quite a random price!
BAILEY! THIS IS AMAZING LOVE LOVE IT. but i cant actually read the text at the bottom. but apart from that itss soo good and megan looked really niceee in it
Shirley!
Your magazine is just about nearly as cool as you. I love is apart from that ugly man you have on the font ha. BUT the eyes do look good and my hair looks okay. Anyway back to the point I really love the blue background which compliments the photograph really well. I also think that the photo has a sense of mystery to it which is really inviting for the readers. I also love the clever use of puns and alliteration very orignial and quirky just like you!
Love Vickers ;) x
Bazza, looking good, like the way the colours all compliment eachother, especially the way that the hair also matchs the colour of the text.
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